AflacMan13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eyes Up]

This was funny.

This is a prime example of what happens when you violate Man Law... guy number 2 did not follow the minimum urinal buffer zone regulation. He needs to review his Man Law Handbook once more. A minimum of one urinal buffer zone is mandatory.

Guy number 1 wasn't much better though... he violated one of the Top Ten MOST IMPORTANT Man Laws... NO TALKING!!!

They both need to be punished... FIGHT!!!

[SC 2 Kodex - Zealots]

Hmm... very informative.

If I played this game it would have been more relevant to me; however as I cannot validate any of the information (nor do I care to) I can only say that this tutorial was well constructed and for those who play would be very helpful to them. You did a very good job on this. Good work.

Might I recommend some flash animation, game play videos, and animated transitions between each page.

[Giant Enemy Karkat]

If I were high maybe...

If I were tripping this would be supremely awesome.

However, the repetitiveness is highly annoying. Try fleshing this out and draw some more stuff for this.

[OUTBalanced Promo]

Refine

Could use a little refinement on the lines. They look too much like they were drawn by middle schoolers with too much time on their hands.

I do not mean to sound insulting, I am just being as honest as possible. Instead of just drawing the weapons and flnging them around in 2D, try actually making them look better and rendering the whole thing in 3D.

Yunguy1 responds:

Well the weapons are supposed to be shapes, not fully customized guns that were drawn by pro makers. This is OUTBalanced, meaning that the weapons are supposed to be simple. Plus, this is a collab. You don't even know which part is mine. So please, watch your mouth about who makes what. I get really mad.

[Knock Knock part 1]

Sound fix.

Your sound was horrible. It was physically impossible to discern the dialogue from the bacground noises throughout most of the flash.

Also your line work, inking, and shading could all use work. The animations did not always match up to the sounds and it felt very sluggish at times.

I am going to be nice and tell you that this is a mess. From what I could tell the concept may have had some validity but the entire flash was just too messy to see it.

LuckoDaStars responds:

thanks man i'll keep that in mind for my future animation, it was my first flash though it was bond to have mistakes, but that's the fun, you learn from feedback, but i'm still an amutar. anything you can tell me plz also put them on my mail

[Maximillion in Vietnam 3]

Uhmmmm... 6 years?

As they said on South Park once... Liberachi.

[Flash 3D Demo]

Hmm... music is your friend.

Might I recommend some Electronica for the background music. I recommend Cla, Bazooka Joe, Daddy DJ, Lords of Acid, Sister Sound, or Poseidon Cagliari.

You definetly need music. Without music any flash or even any movie or tv show is just a boring bunch of pictures.

halomademeapc responds:

Thanks, I noticed that, but I wasn't entirely sure of how the audio portal citations worked (this being my first submission). I went ahead and added a song.

[HP8: The Inevitable End]

WaAAAYYYYY too slow.

Your rirle screen is far too slow. I got bored after the first 15 seconds of it. Your "movie" started out with a very loud beep noise. Annoying to say the least. It also seemed to have no real plot, the action was painfully slow, and the whole thing moved like pond water. Your music was decent but the sound fx were slow and off. There was no dialouge or text at all. Nothing to go off of at all. Very boring and uninteresting all around. Painfully slow for a flash that should take like 15-30 seconds. Took a full 2 minutes to hit the credits. Sprite Flash is generally limiting in some of the stuff that can be done with it... but it is only limited by your imagination really.

Again you must try Padawon. The Learning you must have... hrumm hrumm hrummmmm.

Celvan responds:

Thanks, I'll try to make this better

[Marvin Finds His Kitty]

Claymation... true flash art.

This is well done. You are a very skilled artist. Keep it up. Claymation takes alot of time and skill to even begin to create. This is way baetter than maybe half of the stuff that gets posted on NG... especially those dang clocks. Buuuhhhh...

[Smoking Kills Ad]

Linky no worky.

It is all in the title... Mildly funny, and the stick guy was well drawn IMO. Chuckle worthy. Nice public awareness ad.