@_@ 0.0 DUUUUUDDDE!!!!
I really like the stick fight sequences. You are a very imaginative artist and I would definetly like to see more. Awesome job.
@_@ 0.0 DUUUUUDDDE!!!!
I really like the stick fight sequences. You are a very imaginative artist and I would definetly like to see more. Awesome job.
Good. But the sound...
I liked it. There was just one thing. The sound was a bit off. The dialouge was about the right decibel level but, the music during the flash backs was really loud.
Funny but lacking something...
This was funny buuuut... It was missing something. Can you guess what? The first few products were quite funny, but then it got somewhat tedious and boring. There wass omething misssing throughout the entire "commercial". Yes your drawings were amusing. Yes your animation was well thought out and well done. Yes the humor was good.
BUT.
You forgot the music bro.
Music keeps an audience interested in things. It fills that void in the subconcious where the attention span goes once it reaches it's breaking point, which for most folks is between 30 seconds and 1 minute. If you are going to do animation you have to make sure you include some sort of background music and background sounds. Your sound effects were almost non existant as well.
Tunes.
Music has always been one of the cornerstones of Cinema. Without some sort of background tunes; movies would suck. No tunes no Oscar nominee.
BSOD'ed
Puts new meaning to the words Blue Screen of Death.
wwwOOOOOOooooooo.....
It like revenge the Toy Story. It was very creepy and funny.
Syndication?
DUDE for the love of all that is good in this world you have got to get this stuff syndicated by one of the tv networks. PLEEEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!! You would be doing the world a grave injustice if you did not at least try. You have got real talent now flaunt it.
Intro maybe?
This is your first flash? Wow someone has done there homework. This is one of the best firsts I have seen before. For spritemation this is really good. I would say that with maybe some credits added it would make a great intro to an episode of a sprite series. Or maybe even a good flash game. Keep up your hobby you could be really good.
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